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1. Intro. Hook: i. Have you ever imagined a day and wondered how the world’s climate has changed in these years?b. Background info : focusing more on how climate change negatively affects humans. Think rising sea levels and flooding, stronger more deadly hurricanes, more famine, drought, and deadly wildfires…
c. Thesis
i. To solve these problems, renewable energy should be used, and reuse the gas that comes out of the factories.
2. Body1
Use of renewable energies
• Topic sentence: The use of renewable energy such as solar energy, water energy, wind energy and electric energy. This energy must be used in our current age for an event from not using natural gases, petroleum, or oil because it does not affect the climate.
2Examples should be used for the first body and 2 Explanations
Example: focus on the items in your topic sentence: solar, water, and wind. Electricity is derived from these three sources of energy.
Explanation: • Wind turbines help make people use renewable energy, which is from the wind, which humans will not use any other energy or anything that harms the environment, such as gasoline and oil, because by burning oil, harmful gases are produced that contribute to climate change.
It is a problem-solution research paper.
The problem will be in the introduction, The solutions will be in body 1 and body 2
